Rough Cut 1

My feedback on it would be:
Nice logo but it is a little pixalated - can we make it clearer?
Can your institutional logo have sound too?
Could you add in a second institutional logo of another company - it does not have to be as fancy as the first logo but would be more realistic for more than one company to produce the film.
You need a black screen prior to the tied up chair moment to give your audience a second to process the institutional logos prior to the film starting
Nice tilt on the chair up to her face
'Bring me the girl' - the framing is slightly off, and the man looks like a vicar - is this intentional?
Nice feet close up cut to hands and the rope - it works well and shows a passage of time
Try to stop the tilt from being so wobbly moving up to the men
Can you add in a frame of her getting up - it's all a bit sudden that she is in the chair one minute and out the next
The fight sequence could be polished - even her maybe punching the camera to give it from the mans perspective? The knife stab is a bit unrealistic
Maybe add in a blackout after she leaves the room after the fight
The phone ring is really loud - can that come down a bit?
Nice inset frame but the larger image is very dark - I would re-film the scenes with the man giving instructions to make it clearer to the audience
Good non-diegetic sound but let it play through the phone call from Grant too
Nice six months earlier and sound effect
Good match on action in the office
The narrative is clear and you can tell the genre - Well Done!
Add in your titles now but be sure to follow conventions and consider font well.